As the storm cleared out it was still dark and cloudy. Adults, teens and children went out to check the damage. A lot of trees have fallen down. One of the trees have fallen down on the outside of a house luckily nobody was hurt but it was blocking the front door. Then another tree fell on their street, workers where helping to get that tree off the road. There where twigs and leaves all over. Even a pool had a bunch of twigs and leaves and tiny bugs. People from other streets also experience the storm and helped each other in the town. This is one of the worst storms I have experienced" said a girl that lived in the neighborhood.
Of course she was a kid and she may have not experience a hurricane or tornado. Other people might say it was a little storm and it wasn't a big deal. But whatever they say it was, it was the next breaking story.
I like your title. (Puns are the best.) I also liked how your story had so much detail in it. It was very interesting to hear how a storm did that much damage.
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